My partner and I aren’t particularly good at writing so we decided to make a really long poem about A.C.E! We wrote it together, I did the art for all the except Wow which was done by Fran , who also composed the music in the video version!
For a video version where it is read with music composed for the poem click Here
There is also an instrumental version!
The clouds drifted in the sky
As Jun began to wonder why
On this beautiful day, soon to be New Year’s Eve
All he was able to do was grieve
A tear rolled down his cheek
As he wiped his eyes and struggled to speak
Why did this have to happen
He thought, why them?
Why did he get so attached
When they didn’t give a crap
They left him alone, all by himself
And when they left they took his wealth
Everything he owned had gone
Along with the people he cared about
All Jun felt was emptiness
When he deserved happiness
But he was betrayed and deceived
The night before New Year’s Eve
Donghun held back tears
As he tried to hide from his fears
“Why did I do this?” He said
As he pulled his duvet over his head
All he saw was dark
Not a single child out at the park
There was nothing left anymore
Everything was gone except for a closed door
The door that separated him from Jun
It all ended way too soon
“I shouldn’t have listened” he sobbed
Hugging his pillow, his head throbbed
“I’m a monster” he suddenly yelled out
Anyone could tell without a doubt
“What we did was wrong”
Nothing is worth it in the long
Run. Far away.
That’s all I want to do - leave
I cannot stay
The night before New Year’s Day
I truly am an evil devil
No one can reach my level
I enjoy doing this
It’s something you don’t want to miss
Seeing people suffer just like I do
I turn their world full of green and blue
And make it white and black
Suddenly they hear a crack
The sound of their pain
As it begins to pour with rain
Now Jun sees what I went through
They left me in a hard time too
So I made them leave him
I can tell they regret listening to me
I don’t care they can struggle as well
Watch as I destroy or sell
Everything they care about
I’ll be rich and powerful
There is no stopping me, Wow
I, Kim Sehyoon, will be the best
Who cares about the rest?
I’ll get my own way
I said on New Year’s Day
“You have to stop this isn't right”
Jason yelled, clenching his fists tight
We hurt our friend
But this can’t be the end
We have to work together
A.C.E will last forever
Donghun shook his head and cried
Wow laughed as Hun began to hide
The empty void where Jun was
Grew bigger and bigger and bigger
Jason was filled with determination
With a specific destination
Fixed in his mind
He had to be kind
He had to help them and get to Jun
As he stated up at the moon
He didn’t know how
But he would do it now
His thoughts would twist and bend
The night before the end
An innocent voice was heard
A boy as cute as a baby bird
His smile becoming like the sun
Staring at Jason and Donghun
But he didn’t look at me
Perhaps he couldn’t see
The great things I do
For me and for you
“I think we should apologise to Jun”
“No that’s our doom!”
I yelled and glared at Chan
Deciding I needed to be a man
I pulled out my gun
And decided to have a little fun
Bang! Bang! Bang!
The gun fired as I sang
Chan’s yellow aura disappeared
Just like their lives
I dashed away from the scene
Forgetting what I did was mean
I erased Jun from my memory
As well as the others
Time to start a new life
Forget about a gun or a knife
Because that’s it
The end of A.C.E
Comments (4)
What the heck this was so cool—
The poem flowed very smoothly and the plot was intriguing (and sad ;-;)
The pictures were pretty and I like how the Wow picture is different from the others
The music was cool and helped set the tone really well
The use of POV was :ok_hand: :ok_hand:
And overall this was just super cool??
Aw thank you so much!
Woahh this is super cool! The drawings are really nice and I love how you made a video too! :two_hearts: :revolving_hearts:
Thank you!